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Simple Directions April 14, 2003

Posted by jak in Creative Writing, Life, Poem, Poetry, Writing.
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I see a southern starry night,
She empties seas and creates light.

I feel a northern force beset,
I know his will won’t let me rest.

I see a man come from the west,
He steals my soul, I failed god’s test.

I feel a breeze sent from the east,
She cools my brow and brings me peace.

© 2003 Argonaut

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1. jeques - August 25, 2007

Great thoughts, wonderful flow, lovely write.

I wish you well ~ Jeques

2. transwriter - November 2, 2007

nice.

3. janetleigh - January 6, 2008

I simply love this poem, Jason! Especially the first and last couplets. Very powerful images propelled by passion. What a heart find! You cover a lot in few words, and do it justice, my friend..:)


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