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I Wonder Why We Wait March 15, 2007

Posted by jak in Creative Writing, Life, limerick, Poem, Poetry, Writing.
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Moonbright eyes of two,
Cried soft and signaled true,
Shy as a purr,
I remember her,
Waiting for my pursuit.

© 2007 Argonaut

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1. ngriffin - March 17, 2007

I like it alot! You made every word count.

2. Nancy Lee - March 20, 2007

Beautiful jak!
So much said in so few words…
I so much enjoy your writing.
Nancy

3. qazse - March 29, 2007

shy as a purr

super

(super sounds like a comment a teacher might write next to the happy face sticker)


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