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Entitled Man April 10, 2007

Posted by jak in Creative Writing, Life, Poem, Poetry, Writing.
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The roads are rolling quickly tonight
Flowing full of friction and fight
Men mowing down
Any green on the ground
And our children left only with plight

© 2007 Argonaut

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1. Ceeej~ - August 19, 2007

This one is like a little embryo of thought for me~ I feel the same way and the middle line stopped me solid. Great middle line…but I was left wanting more. If that was your intent, it worked:)

If you take that middle line all alone and roll it around, its pretty powerful.

I like the first line too…

I love the inspiration behind this one, the heart that tugs a little when you see life mowed down.

Ceeej~

2. Amanda Sanz - August 21, 2007

This is great! Thanks for sharing


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