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Obsession October 13, 2007

Posted by jak in Creative Writing, health, Life, love, Poem, Poetry, Writing.
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His last breath was one of passion,
One that warmed his core.
His passion led to easy breath
And to easy breath no more.

© 2007 Argonaut

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1. rohithnair - October 13, 2007

Touching last breath…
and easy breath no more….
grt…

2. Amanda Sanz - October 14, 2007

I love the way you opened with this one, powerful.

3. janetleigh - October 15, 2007

I like anything with passion in it..:) One last breath, then pluck memory flowers from the air.. welcome death. I like your poignant take on last breath, jason.. gripping

4. Michelle Johnson - October 16, 2007

At least his last breath was one of passion. I like the easiness of this piece.

Good Job
Michelle


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