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Fortunate souls are we October 17, 2007

Posted by jak in Creative Writing, Life, love, Poem, Poetry, Writing.
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Thoughts unsaid
Are bleed in red
Fortunate souls are we

We dive into love
As wounded doves
Unafraid of what we see

© 2007 Argonaut

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1. writesome - October 18, 2007

That’s so true. Beautiful. Love is an amazing vulnerable experience.

2. writerlulu - October 18, 2007

I love what you did with “bleed in red.” It’s great to read purposeful changes in word usage. Love is like that…

3. Tosha - October 21, 2007

very thoughtful … i like it … esp cos just a few words tell the entire story … all that is needed is thoughtful heart and understanding brains.

cheers!!

4. Kris - October 21, 2007

Profoundness in such succinctness.

5. aphrodite - October 23, 2007

I have to agree.. profound in so few words…
pleased to meet you…

6. mysoul - October 24, 2007

:), I am not sure about being unafraid but I know we dive like we cant help ourselves.

7. Chris - October 31, 2007

I love this one, really great!

8. Michelle Johnson - November 1, 2007

I haven’t been around lately and thought I would drop by. Thanks for the Halloween surprise. I really liked it.

Doesn’t everyone go into love blindly thinking things will be different when they arrive? And, all those words that could have been said but, weren’t. How many relationships would have survived if only they took the time to listen? Thanks for this poem.

Have a nice day.
Michelle


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