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Eager Lips October 21, 2007

Posted by jak in Creative Writing, health, Life, love, Poem, Poetry, sex, stream of conciousness, Writing.
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Lusting and binging, are as sure as soft vanity… we bring them to eager lips, for they bring us to sanity, they stop us from drifting into depressing dark places, and they put fleeting smiles on our angelic faces.

© 2007 Argonaut

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1. anneliseinmind - October 21, 2007

elusive saviors

2. Amanda Sanz - October 22, 2007

One word, truth

3. withserendipity - October 27, 2007

Very Powerful

4. Soulless - October 31, 2007

Makes me think of another pair of equally “eager lips”. That, or chocolate. ^_^

5. Michelle Johnson - November 1, 2007

I must be missing something here because I feel like you are talking about anorexia/ bulimia here. The food they bring to their lips and how satisfied they are when they get rid of it. I am sorry if I didn’t get this right. Keep up the good work.

Have a nice day.
Michelle

6. Jak - November 1, 2007

michelle, its about vices/sins in general and the dichotomy of how we view them. an eating disorder would certainly apply well.

7. Jamie - November 3, 2007

My first thought was the same as Michelle’s. I can see it applying to many things though.

It makes you think.

8. janetleigh - November 4, 2007

These words make me think of addictions; doing something we know we shouldn’t for the fleeting sense of satisfaction – until the next needed fix…;> A thoughtful piece..

9. Denise - November 20, 2007

Reminds me of how I used to be. And not just the eating disorder part.


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