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Go Home Baby Sister December 8, 2007

Posted by jak in Creative Writing, Life, love, Poem, Poetry, Writing.
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Go home baby sister, this boy will do you harm.
The rough edge of yesterday has yet to keep me warm,
My world, so worn.

I look for love. crave it, as human as I know.
But my path trails surely away from faith,
My world, so torn.

Go home baby sister, and see sadness slow.
Let those rough edges dim softly to a blur,
My world, so warm.

© 2007 Argonaut

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1. writerlulu - December 9, 2007

This poem feels so sad to me. It’s somber, and I think the tone of it is also despondent, laced with a thread of hope.

My heart is heavy…
It’s gorgeous. Linda


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