i will then devour March 31, 2008
Posted by Jason Keath in america, health, Life, love, Poem, Poetry, Writing.trackback
when i drink, i rarely taste
the detail of discerning
falls first
to indulged tips
of lips
and other things
when i taste, i will then devour
the distance
of learning
fills fast my mind,
sure as I breathe…
I will always crave
© 2008 Argonaut
great! :)
Like this very much, Jason, especially how the following lines feel in my mouth when reading out loud, “the detail of discerning
falls first
to indulged tips
of lips”
this is so cool..:)