Who I would like to meet August 18, 2007
Posted by Jason Keath in Creative Writing, Life, love, Poem, Poetry, Writing.trackback
A soul overflowing with
honor and grace
Living in sun
resting in shade
Swimming in love
Alive… Unafraid.
© 2007 Argonaut
Argonaut 
I almost want the last line to be separated, two separate lines, one word each. Each of those two words are important enough to stop and take them in individually~ But I know whay they are where they are being true to form and structure….but some things can be bent and still keep the rhyme intact. Just a thought:)
I’d like to meet this person too!!
Ceeej~
agreed. i played with that actually, but i need those words on the same line together. however they would benefit from some separation, allowing each to be taken in as you said. i will play with it, thank you.
I love the flow of this one. Clear and to the point. Stay inspired!
I love this one — very nice.
I would love to BE this person!
Well stated thought expressed in brevity. Not a single word is wasted. Everything works well together to achieve clarity and refinement.
I wish you well ~ Jeques
What lydia2007 said. ;)
This one flows like a river to the sea. You say so much in economy of words.